I’ve just had a lesson in humility. I’ve been editing a manuscript written by someone else. When I felt that it was as good as I could make it I sent it to a proofreader. Her main comment when I got it back was that “if I shook it real good a lot of commas could come out.”
Well, she was right about that. I don’t know how much difference that will make in how I write. However, I have noticed that fewer commas are used in modern books. What I have learned from and because of my proofreader is that:
- If both independent clauses are short, using a comma to separate clauses in a compound sentence may not be necessary.
- Not every phrase or clause has to be set off with a comma. Sometimes things make just as much sense without them.
- “Open” punctuation style displays not only fewer commas but other punctuation as well.
However . . . . .
In attempting to research “open” punctuation online I find that it is a recent innovation (thank God!) brought about by the electronic age and most references to it have to do with business letters. Phew! I was starting to wonder if I’ve become passé.
I’ve only used three commas in the passage above. I could have added at least ten more. Where should they go?
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© Beth Morgan